Almost

I wrote this song last summer, after purchasing a guitar amp.

I sang some random lyrics for vocal effect ... the actual song will have "real" lyrics.

Is there enough of a transition between the intro and the verse? Does the drum beat work, or is it too happy?

At one point, I was a big fan of the rhythm guitar... but now I think it might be a little too loose and floppy-sounding.

Thoughts?